my opinion on other blogs #1

       Hello I am kind of new at blogging, and decided to look up some other bloggers. To see what they would be doing. What kinds of things they would add to their blog to make them more interesting. Last to see what they do to make you interested once you get into their blog. So I decided to give my review of 3 of them.

https://wolfsgamingblog.com/2022/02/01/i-lose-power-for-a-day-and-sony-buys-bungie-wtf/

     I liked this blog it did a good job of being a causal-professional blog. It starts off with a story that makes the person relatable, but it also obviously does not expect you to know personal details about the person. On the other hand it also does a good job of staying factual to the situation. I like how the blog is organized it goes from a more personal story then gets into the facts of the situation. After that it goes on to ask the audience what they think of the situation. One complaint is that the background is quite bland and their is only one picture. 

https://whatsericplaying.com/2021/10/25/space-invaders/

    I also enjoyed this blog; this one also did a really good of nailing the casual-professional. I think it did a really good job of explaining what  the board game is. One of the things this one did a better job at than the first one was adding pictures. One of it's short comings was that it obviously was not as friendly to new people who are coming to his blog. It uses some terms but does not really define them. 

 https://bookriot.com/queer-space-opera-books/

    This one is not my favorite. I think it does a good job of being casual-professional. It is also organized pretty well. Unfortunately it does a bad job of supporting it's claims. Like it emphases that the book is fun but does not tell why the book is fun.

    In conclusion I think that for a blog you want to be more personal at the begging. Then you want to branch out and say the point you are trying to say. End on a more personal note. You also need art and pictures to show what you are seeing. Last you need to support all your points.